Memories
Memory...An endless whiff
Floats back and forth
Between you and me
-A strange chord
Fluid and abnormal
Faded yet strong
Time has made it translucent,
A Liquid story
In which our unsaid words
Float and swim across silences....
Perhaps they will melt away
heal
and lay to rest
all those aberrations
that we could do without
Perhaps,we can then see
That it's all okay either ways...
However,It has stirred something
That changed...
Who we are..today
posted by shikha @ 5:51 PM
26 Comments:
Are you gonna sing this to the tune of the Barbra Streisand song?
Velvet welcome...havent heard the song you are mentioning!!
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WOW again!
This time lemme tell ya which lines/words pierced me:
Fluid
Faded yet strong
Time has made it translucent
Perhaps
okay either ways
today
these words/phrases were powerful/had meaning because of the others words they were placed in context with...I could see them hitting me ...
lv
:) nice....!
Good one!
Ah...I always enjoy reading here!
I have been absent from blogdom...:( Sorry!
it flowed yeah.tight structure as well.i liked what I saw.
peace
Yeah, guess it's okay either ways. :)
Stirred up memories for me..beautifully written!
nice little poem again, Shikha. heard you are leaving the city. wish u good luck for the transition!
Pune is a strange city for an outsider who has just settled in. For a good laugh view the blog " Museful in Pune " , an observation on Puneites eccentric behaviour.
Perhaps...Yes...
Heard "Time" by Alan Parsons Project?
Pooja: You deleted your blog??Will miss reading it:))
Lovemarks,Gautam,Rohit:Thanks!!
Blue:Yeah..It's all in the mind..and it cannot be anything but okay:))
Perspective:Welcome!!Thanks
Meeta:Thanks Ya!!Am happy that you are back!!
Ashes:Yes..that's what we all live for!!
White Magpie:Hmm...have heard..but will try to get hold of this!!
Leonviti:Will do:))
i think the tune that velvet G is refering to is called Memories but that is the only similarity. nice poem.
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UPDATE! X-(
Rohit...have too much on my mind to be able to blog...will take a while!!
Hi Sikha...this was really special one...
Keep mind aside and blog? :p
Update!!!
Very provactive, well written, excellent use of language.
Great images...nice pen...
Very very pretty! Touched a chord in me somewhere :)
Very soon u will be a memory if u dont show up soon...Grrrr
I really liked the way you have expressed your emotions..and the easy flow had me reading it without a miss...
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