Thursday, June 08, 2006

A long lost poem..

Now,right now
Let us draw a line
and promise that we'll not cross

A tall order...
that's what understanding is all for

Like disease
and labyrinth

it spreads
engulfing your soul and mine

barbed spaces,
protecting your sanctity and mine.

We need the silence
to pierce through this uneasy peace
to talk to the noises in the heads

Let stillness take over
let life take shape
like amoeba

On it's own!!!

11 Comments:

At 10:52 AM GMT+5:30 , Blogger Pj said...

As long as you do not draw a line it is vague...the moment U draw one-there is temptation to cross!

and holding back never rendered silence nor understanding- perspective may be as u usually tell me

 
At 11:06 AM GMT+5:30 , Blogger shikha said...

Pooja...holding back,just leads to introspection and usually dealing with the more micro emotional issues in a more productive manner to look at the larger picture in the end.

Yes,I do think individual perspectives to deal with the situation..no right and wrong as long as it provides peace of mind and happiness!

 
At 1:10 PM GMT+5:30 , Blogger R said...

Let stillness take over
let life take shape
like amoeba


WONDERFUL!

Talking through, as you said...is such a damn need! :|

 
At 1:14 PM GMT+5:30 , Blogger Blue Athena said...

like this sense of space! :)

 
At 1:26 PM GMT+5:30 , Blogger shikha said...

Rohit::)

Blue:Glad you liked the sense of space.Space..literally(in the text)and otherwise(in real life):>>

 
At 3:10 PM GMT+5:30 , Blogger Rose said...

Space to listen to the voices in ur mind and make sense out of it..

Very vital..

:)

..Me

 
At 6:16 PM GMT+5:30 , Blogger AltFil said...

The way I look at it...if and when you start drawing up rules and lines in any relationship, sooner or later, it's going to go down. You shouldn't have to ask for space, respect, love...in a good, healthy relationship, they're a given.

Nice poem. Like "We need the silence...noises in the heads"

 
At 6:40 AM GMT+5:30 , Blogger Nazli Hardy said...

this means one thing, today; another, tomorrow. reflective, meaningful, open to interpreation, evoking something unique in time to each person.

for me right now - the space is what draws me in

happened to come across your blog and so glad i did!

cheers,

 
At 3:42 PM GMT+5:30 , Blogger shikha said...

Rose:Correct:)..

Altfil:This was not written with just relationships in mind.

Nazli:perceptions true for everything in life:)

 
At 12:52 PM GMT+5:30 , Blogger AltFil said...

Right...but I didn't mean only man-woman relationships

 
At 2:31 PM GMT+5:30 , Blogger R said...

New post?

:D

 

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